Alright, how do I say this simply?
It seems as if this book was written by a 14 year old, unfortunately...
It seems the other might have had multiple personalities while writing. It has multiple errors and a child-like story. The characters alone, such as "rose" the main character, are very poorly developed, seeming at one moment to be very intellectual, and the next, a complete retard attacking a cop, because of a sarcastic comment. Not only that, but conversation dialog is extremely hard to follow, for the lack of mention of who's talking, so you are left to guess at which one is speaking at which time. And the descriptions? Oh well, constantly switches from 3rd person, to 1st person, back to 3rd person, and to mix it up, let's throw another character in 1st person in the same paragraph.
Just, i'm 1/4th through the book, and the only reason I'm even Considering finishing this child-like book, is for the information regarding the battletech timeline.
If you are looking to further your battletech knowledge, read it...
Otherwise looking for a good battletech adventure??
Go read the Jade Phoenix Trilogy...
That's a series, anyone can enjoy. |