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Good effort, but author has a lot to work on
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Buy this book because:
1. there aren't many novels being publish dealing with the love lives of gay men of color
2. it's a good effort, a contribution
With that said, I should warn you that the novel has many problem--many which are too obvious to ignore. In the hands of a seasoned writer "Right Side of the Wrong Way" could've been a great novel. It's a good storyline: professional older man falls for the well endowed troubled younger guy who wreaks havoc in his life. In other words, it's pure of good ole gay drama; full of twist and turns. The only problem is that Mr. Smith's skills as a writer haven't improved much since his last effort, "Down For Whatever." I often hear that the first lesson on how-to-write is that one should show not tell, which Mr. Smith sadly overlooks. The novel reads as if Kenny, the main character, is talking to a friend; he simply relates his story from point a, to b, to c, and so on without zest. It's stale. Also, considering that Kenny is a "professional" man his language is weak.
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